From e6e4a01c2ae198bde731045f4451ba345877cadb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Seth Chaiklin <sdc.blanco@youmail.dk>
Date: Sat, 1 Feb 2020 18:22:39 +0100
Subject: update Online Update help page

   - add headings
   - correct outline level
   - add control
   - align help page with dialog box
   - added "online update" icon
   - updated "note" about installation of Update module,
        a common intro, with sys-specific details.

Change-Id: Id237acbb93ec90a6d7622135e5bdc212f28ca1a4
Reviewed-on: https://gerrit.libreoffice.org/c/help/+/87810
Tested-by: Jenkins
Reviewed-by: Seth Chaiklin <sdc.blanco@youmail.dk>
Reviewed-by: Olivier Hallot <olivier.hallot@libreoffice.org>
---
 source/text/shared/optionen/online_update.xhp | 20 +++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'source')

diff --git a/source/text/shared/optionen/online_update.xhp b/source/text/shared/optionen/online_update.xhp
index 6d4c73c710..0fa05a8c06 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/optionen/online_update.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/optionen/online_update.xhp
@@ -19,7 +19,6 @@
  *   the License at http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0 .
  -->
 
-
 <meta>
       <topic id="textsharedoptionenonlineupdatexhp" indexer="include" status="PUBLISH">
          <title xml-lang="en-US" id="tit">Online Update</title>
@@ -44,11 +43,12 @@
          <embed href="text/shared/00/00000406.xhp#online_update"/>
       </section>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/autocheck" id="bm_id877101" localize="false"/>
-<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id2189397" role="heading" level="2">Check for updates automatically</paragraph>
+<note xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id4057130">Online Update is a module that is installed by default. <switchinline select="sys"><caseinline select="WIN">To exclude, choose "Custom" in the Setup when installing %PRODUCTNAME. </caseinline><caseinline select="UNIX">Check your distribution package to see if it is possible to exclude installation of Online Update. </caseinline></switchinline></note>
+<h2 id="hd_id671580577871833">Online Update Options</h2>
+<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id2189397" role="heading" level="3">Check for updates automatically</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id7523728" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Mark to check for online updates periodically, then select the time interval how often %PRODUCTNAME will check for online updates.</ahelp> %PRODUCTNAME will check once a day, week, or month, as soon as a working Internet connection is detected. If you connect to the Internet by a proxy server, set the proxy on <switchinline select="sys"><caseinline select="MAC"><item type="menuitem">%PRODUCTNAME - Preferences</item></caseinline><defaultinline><item type="menuitem">Tools - Options</item></defaultinline></switchinline><item type="menuitem"> - Internet - Proxy</item>.</paragraph>
-      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id8994109" role="paragraph">When an update is available, an icon in the menu bar displays some explaining text. Click the icon to proceed.</paragraph>
+      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id8994109" role="paragraph">When an update is available, an icon in the menu bar <image id="img_id3155415" src="extensions/res/update/ui/onlineupdate_16.svg" width="0.4583in" height="0.1354in"><alt xml-lang="en-US" id="alt_id3155415">Update Icon</alt></image> displays some explaining text. Click the icon to proceed.</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id476699" role="paragraph">If you disable the check, the icon is removed from the menu bar.</paragraph>
-      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id4057130" role="note">Online Update is a module that can be selected or deselected to be installed. Choose the customized installation in the Setup of %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/everyday" id="bm_id3116855" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id266426" role="heading" level="3">Every Day</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3031098" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">A check will be performed once a day.</ahelp></paragraph>
@@ -61,15 +61,17 @@
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/checknow" id="bm_id5540025" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id1418805" role="heading" level="3">Check now</paragraph>
       <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id1743522" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">A check will be performed now.</ahelp></paragraph>
+<h2 id="hd_id3051545">Download Destination</h2>
+<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3061311" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Displays the selected folder to store the downloaded files.</ahelp></paragraph>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/autodownload" id="bm_id1509140" localize="false"/>
-<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id1418806" role="heading" level="2">Download updates automatically</paragraph>
+<h3 xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id1418806">Download updates automatically</h3>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3174230" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Enable the automatic download of updates to the specified folder.</ahelp></paragraph>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/destpathlabel" id="bm_id0116200901051322" localize="false"/>
-      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id3051545" role="heading" level="3">Download destination</paragraph>
-      <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id3061311" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Displays the selected folder to store the downloaded files.</ahelp></paragraph>
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/optonlineupdatepage/changepath" id="bm_id0116200901051320" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="hd_id1418807" role="heading" level="3">Change</paragraph>
-<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id0116200901063996" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Click to select a folder to download the files.</ahelp></paragraph>
+<paragraph xml-lang="en-US" id="par_id0116200901063996" role="paragraph"><ahelp hid=".">Click to select the destination folder for downloaded files.</ahelp></paragraph>
+<h2 id="hd_id411580578548938">User Agent</h2>
+<paragraph role="paragraph" id="par_id331580578595346">Enable the check to send information about your %PRODUCTNAME version, operating system and basic hardware. This information is used to optimize the download.</paragraph>
 
    </body>
-</helpdocument>
+</helpdocument>
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